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Thursday, August 9, 2018

My Holiday

3 comments:

  1. That sounds fun Thomas you were able to spend time with James and your Dad.
    I decided to go outside and play is another way to write the above sentence. Read over to make sure your writing sounds right. Great job

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  2. Kia ora Thomas, it is great that you spent your holidays with your dad and friends and that you played inside and outside. Good use of capital letters at the beginning of sentences.

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